Haiku #26: Buzz

Whispering, groping,
Yearning, thrusting, encircling
Clasping, panting, hot…

Rocking, climbing high
Fall, sigh, surrender to me!
Oh the bliss of it…

For the love of God!
Would someone please hand me the
BLOODY flyswatter?

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breathenoah Says:
August 10, 2009 at 5:15 am

I like reading about a good smacking. I love the whooshing sound it makes, and then the crack! at the end. I always get a buzz out of that too….
palandrewrussell Says:
August 10, 2009 at 8:33 am

lol Extremely funny.
1writegirl Says:
August 10, 2009 at 6:32 pm

Ah yes, Noah, nothing like a good smack/crack now and again…:) Paul, glad you liked it!
medicatedlady Says:
August 11, 2009 at 10:34 am

Very cheeky, as the Bri’ish say. I like good humor in haiku.
1writegirl Says:
August 11, 2009 at 11:06 pm

And who doesn’t love those cheeky Brits, anyway?? 🙂

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