Haiku# 30: My dog, the teenager

At first, a Mohawk
Then clothes, showers, chewing gum
Now, the dog wants bling.

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11 Responses to “Haiku# 30: My dog, the teenager”

wordwand Says:
February 24, 2010 at 11:56 am

a lovely haiku , well done
1writegirl Says:
February 24, 2010 at 8:14 pm

Thank you, Wordwand.
Pamela Villars Says:
February 26, 2010 at 11:28 am

Oh, yea.

street dog, wild and young
pours his doubts into spinning
brushy tail now bare
1writegirl Says:
March 2, 2010 at 10:04 am

Right on Pamela! Thanks!
bindo Says:
March 4, 2010 at 10:51 am

Mugsy is a fool
Praying on your sympathy
Give the dog a bone
1writegirl Says:
March 5, 2010 at 8:34 am

B., how dare you upstage me?!? And how come I didn’t think of that (the bone, that is…;)?
lazfreedman Says:
March 5, 2010 at 2:04 pm

I Dig your Haiku!

Thanks,

Laz
1writegirl Says:
March 6, 2010 at 10:26 am

Thanks Lance, glad you dig it!
Bryan Borland Says:
March 11, 2010 at 1:43 pm

I love it. I’ve got a house full of teenagers myself, plus a demanding diva.
1writegirl Says:
March 12, 2010 at 9:32 am

Oy! You’re a brave man, I can barely handle one…
Alan Summers Says:
August 30, 2010 at 5:23 am

Very very humourous! 😉

Alan, With Words